Working On

1) Better Flow

2) What I am Working on from my essay comments:
     - Put my name, period, and date on the right side of the paper, proper notation
     - Have an actual title, for example, The changes in beliefs about the men in Janie's life
     - Put the name of the novel in italics
     - Prevent wordiness and random useless, spacey words such as for, of, so, as
     - Have a header for each page of my essay
     - Do no put the pg when listing the page number, just put the number
     - Try and develop my topic sentences so one is not stronger than the other
     - Avoid rough writing
     - Again clean up the writing

Pride and Prejudice essay:
From the comments and corrections the two things I have to work are wordiness and clarity.  I would assume that's have to make an effort to make sure that there's not to much in my sentence and that I write with more flow. That as a result would turn into me being able to provide clearer sentences that would get across what I'm trying to see easier.  As always a thesis needs to be constantly improved because there is no perfect thesis.

Hamlet Essay:
As improved on my wordiness an clarity I have to improve on the awkwardness I am causing I my sentences. I should proof read a little more than I already do to make sure I don't miss ticky tac mistakes.  My biggest problem was my rough writing. I feel like I a writing the way I speak because I am such an auditory person and my writing isn't necessarily rough but not polished enough you can say. And once again I have to improve my thesis so really have it feed the core of my essay and be perfectly relatable.

Freud Essay:
The smoothness of my writing improved which I'm happy about I just have to keep my sentences less bulky especially my thesis sentence. Also although it was difficult for this essay I need to use more examples and quotes from the book. And again just more proof reading more proof reading and more proof reading to make sure it's all clear.